
Welcome to a world of action, adventure, honor… and thinly veiled Christian allegory.
I’ll admit, for the first few chapters I couldn’t get past the hokey allusions… “Oh, okay, so the king (whose title is always capitalized ‘King,’ in case there was any doubt who he’s supposed to be) is named Eliam. El-I-Am. So, like, his name means ‘I am God’? Wow, thanks for so deftly slipping that in there.” (See EDIT below.)
But man, am I a sucker for a story. Once I dropped the whole “cocky editor” schtick, I actually started enjoying the story. Really enjoying it. Like, “staying up way past my bedtime to read just one more chapter” really enjoying it. As Larry the Cucumber from VeggieTales once said, “I laughed, I cried… it moved me, Bob.” I was surprised how much I’d gotten into this book.
My recommendation? If you can handle the Left Behind novels without too much eye-rolling, you will probably see this as our generation’s Chronicles of Narnia (which like The Door Within had lots thinly-veiled Christian theology), but all others approach this book like you would a popcorn flick. In other words, don’t expect much more than a fun ride, and you’ll love it.
So… I’d give three (out of five) stars. Cheesiness aside, it was alright.
EDIT: As I’ve thought about it a bit more (and received an e-mail from the author), perhaps I was too harsh with Mr. Batson. This is, after all, a children’s book. Some of the things I saw as cheesy were simply Wayne’s attempt to help his younger readers grasp the allegory. Still, one must be very careful not to underestimate the reader’s intelligence. I fear that may have happened here.
Also, Mr. Batson’s cleared some things up in his e-mail. “Eliam” was apparently neither his first choice for the King’s name, nor was it intended to be a play on words. Alleble and Paragory were, however, as was Ascriot.
My hope is that the reader isn’t spoonfed the allegory in Rise of the Wyrm Lord. That sort of thing is more enjoyable if you have to work for it.